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Category: The Last Coffle

Chapter 4 – 1st Narrative Draft

Posted on May 12, 2025

4 – GNOLLS Hunter approached the entangled gnolls with no misconceptions. Gnolls can speak, but they are animals notwithstanding.  Driven by bloodlust, gnolls are permanently at war with every species around them….

Chapter 3 – 1st Narrative Draft

Posted on May 12, 2025

First draft of Chapter Three. 3 – THE MASSACRE Gnolls are vicious animal warriors. Towering, bipedal hyenas, they outweigh large human men by nearly half.  A single gnoll in close combat with…

Chapter 2 – 1st Narrative Draft

Posted on May 12, 2025

Here is the first narrative draft of Chapter Two. Chapter Three will be posted by the end of the week. 2 – THE RIVER CAMP The day was done. The sun was…

Chapter 1 – 5th Narrative Draft

Posted on May 11, 2025

Gina Denny said something in the TikTok below that got me thinking. The more I thought about it, the more I realized that — even though I will not be querying this…

Chapter 1 – 4th Narrative Draft

Posted on May 10, 2025

Having looked at this and having thought about it, I can put my hero on the first page. It was just a matter of removing two unnecessary paragraphs. So here is Draft…

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